This summer I worked with the author of this blog and in doing so this allowed me insight into her thoughts about life and how she was handling the summer. This blog mainly encompassed the idea of a journal that she would keep for the summer and would record her thoughts and emotions throughout the summer. What I really enjoyed about this blog is the smooth effect it gives the reader. When I was reading through the blog I felt like the writing was very fluid and never found myself confused as to what it was she was discussing. I felt like that because she had written the blog in a journal type style it allowed me to relate more with what she was experiencing. I also really like the fact that she would try to keep the blog as consistent as possible and blog close to everyday. That way you always felt like you were not missing anything that was happening in her life.
One thing I would definitely want to change about this blog would be the fact that it is all just her thoughts written down. I would feel a little more engaged if there were links of some sort or graphics to keep the viewer more attentive. I also feel like the reader has to have some connection with the author because if that was not the case the viewer would lose attention quite quickly.
Shores of Lake Erie
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